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Liz Larson's avatar

I love how clever and deep in the POV your description is! It’s like really seeing through the main characters eyes.

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Lani Diane Rich's avatar

Oh, thanks! I tend to rush through, so this is something I have to work for. Glad it came through!

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Joanna Smith's avatar

My favourite part is Nguyen repeating back what they heard and the game turning it into gibberish or French, you could have so much fun with this!

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Lani Diane Rich's avatar

Thank you! That was fun to play with. 😊

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Beth Clarke's avatar

My favorite part is that, every time I thought I'd figured out my favorite part, a new favorite part came along!

The humor and wit is delightful, the weaving of reality and Game is so clever. I'm stoked to be able to share this on to friends eventually!!

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Lani Diane Rich's avatar

Thank you so much! So glad you liked it!

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Brandon Saiz's avatar

I'm excited! My current favorite part is how you wove the knowledge that we're in a simulation into the story. :) thanks for sharing!

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Lani Diane Rich's avatar

Thank you, Brandon! :)

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